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General Studies – 1


 

Topic: Modern Indian history from about the middle of the eighteenth century until the present- significant events, personalities, issues.

1. In the aftermath of the third Carnatic War, the English reigned supreme over India as all their European rivals had been decisively eliminated. Analyse the reasons for the victory of English. (250 words)

Difficulty level: Easy

Reference: Insights on India

Why the question:

The question is part of the static syllabus of General studies paper – 1 and mentioned as part of Mission-2024 Secure timetable.

Key Demand of the question:

To analyse the reasons for the victory of English over the European rivals in India.

Directive word: 

Analyse – When asked to analyse, you must examine methodically the structure or nature of the topic by separating it into component parts and present them as a whole in a summary.

Structure of the answer:

Introduction: 

Begin by giving context, as to how the third Carnatic paved way for the emergence of British Indian empire.

Body:

Draw a small map of pre-independent India showing the major centres of European powers in India.

In the first part, elaborate upon as to how among the European powers in India, French were the strongest as well as historical adversary of the English and tussle between them was witnessed over the three Carnatic wars.

Next, analyse the reasons as how the British were able to get better of their European Counter parts. Keep in mind as not make your just about Anglo-French Rivalry. This question is about English against all the European powers such as Portuguese, Danes, Dutch and the French.

Conclusion:

Sum up the answer, with the elimination of their European adversaries, the British now turned their attention to Indian Kings.

 

Topic: Modern Indian history from about the middle of the eighteenth century until the present- significant events, personalities, issues.

2. While the Battle of Plassey was crucial in the initial establishment of British influence in Bengal, it was the Battle of Buxar that confirmed and consolidated their power over the region. Analyse. (250 words)

Difficulty level: Moderate

Reference: Insights on India

Why the question:

The question is part of the static syllabus of General studies paper – 1 and mentioned as part of Mission-2024 Secure timetable.

Key Demand of the question:

To write about the importance of Battle of Buxar and in what way it paved way to expansion and consolidation of British Empire in India.

Directive word: 

Analyse – When asked to analyse, you must examine methodically the structure or nature of the topic by separating it into component parts and present them in a summary.

Structure of the answer:

Introduction: 

Start the answer by mentioning the context and the participants in the Battle of Buxar.

Body:

In the first part of the body, elaborate the consequences of the battle to show how it paved way for expansion and consolidation of the British Empire in India. Explain that the Battle of Buxar had far-reaching implications in the consolidation of the British Empire in India. It influenced the politico-economic conditions of Bengal in particular and of India in general.

In the next part, mention as to how Buxar confirmed the gains of Plassey.

Conclusion:

Conclude by summarising.

 

Topic: geographical features and their location-changes in critical geographical features (including water-bodies and ice-caps) and in flora and fauna and the effects of such changes.

3. Climate change is associated with increased variability in weather patterns. In the case of the Indian monsoon, there have been reports of more intense and erratic rainfall, leading to both floods and droughts in different regions. Examine. (250 words)

Difficulty level: Moderate

Reference: Indian Express

Why the question:

A new study has found that monsoon patterns in India have been fast-shifting and erratic in the past decade.

Key Demand of the question:

To write the impact of climate change on monsoon.

Directive word: 

Examine – When asked to ‘Examine’, we must investigate the topic (content words) in detail, inspect it, investigate it and establish the key facts and issues related to the topic in question. While doing so we should explain why these facts and issues are important and their implications.

Structure of the answer:

Introduction: 

Start by introducing Indian monsoon and its importance briefly.

Body:

First, write about the impact of climate change – both monsoon deficit and too much monsoon in counterproductive in the Indian scenario. Mention the drawbacks of the too much surplus in monsoon such as floods, crop damage, increased pest infestation and disease, low outputs etc with supporting examples. Also, include the indirect costs incurred such as increased imports and reduced exports.

Next, write about the ways to tackle the above.

Conclusion:

Conclude with a way forward to deal with climate change impact and mitigate it.              

 


General Studies – 2


 

Topic: Government policies and interventions for development in various sectors and issues arising out of their design and implementation.

4. India is a country known for its rich cultural and religious diversity, and religious tourism holds significant potential in the nation. Discuss the measures that are needed to promote religious tourism in the country. (250 words)

Difficulty level: Moderate

Reference: Live Mint

Why the question:

The Ram temple in Ayodhya could trigger a paradigm shift in the conceptualization and governance of temple towns and pilgrimage centres, leading to greater economic activity, job creation and collective welfare.

Key Demand of the question:

To write about the potential of religious tourism sector in India and the steps that India needs to take to boost religious tourism in the country.

Directive word: 

Discuss – This is an all-encompassing directive – you must debate on paper by going through the details of the issues concerned by examining each one of them. You must give reasons for both for and against arguments.

Structure of the answer:

Introduction: 

Begin by giving statistic related to tourism in India.

Body:

First, write overview of religious tourism given the vast religious diversity in the country.

Next, write about the status of tourism in India. Give facts and figures related to revenue and forex earnings, tourist footfalls. Also highlight the diverse nature of religious tourist circuits in the country.

Next, write about the policy measures needed to promote religious tourism in the country – Highlight the areas where work is needed – security, infrastructure, connectivity and so on. give
details of these three aspects.

Conclusion:

Conclude by writing a way forward.

 


General Studies – 3


 

Topic: Inclusive growth and issues arising from it.

5. Addressing the need for social security in India requires a comprehensive and integrated approach that includes measures for income support, healthcare, education, and protection against various social and economic risks. Substantiate. (250 words)

Difficulty level: Tough

Reference: Live Mint

Why the question:

A five-point agenda to fix the country’s PF scheme could shift 50 million people from informal to formal work.

Key Demand of the question:

To write about the benefits of social security in the country and measures to promote it.

Directive word: 

Substantiate – When you are asked to Substantiate, you must pass a sound judgement about the truth of the given statement in the question or the topic based on evidence.  You must appraise the worth of the statement in question using suitable case studies or/ and examples.

Structure of the answer:

Introduction: 

Start by defining social security.

Body:

In the first part, write about the need of social security – provide individuals and families with protection against economic and social risks.

Write about the ways to promote social security in the country.

Conclusion:

Conclude with a way forward.

 


General Studies – 4


 

Topic: Contributions of moral thinkers and philosophers from India and world.

6. Explain the moral philosophy of Eudaimonism with examples. (150 words)

Difficulty level: Moderate.

Reference: newworldencyclopedia.org

Why the question:

The question is part of the static syllabus of General studies paper – 4.

Key Demand of the question:  

Detailed description of the concept of Eudaimonism, its proponents, few examples and its applicability.

Directive word: 

Explain – Clarify the topic by giving a detailed account as to how and why it occurred, or what is the context. You must be defining key terms wherever appropriate and substantiate with relevant associated facts.

Structure of the answer:

Introduction: 

Start by defining Eudaimonism

Body:

Detailed description of the association of the concept with Virtue ethics, Egoism and ethical Individualism. Contrast this concept to hedonism and give examples such as Volunteering for community action etc, which gives personal satisfaction as well as fulfils man’s potential. Explain with examples.

Conclusion:

Give criticism of Eudaimonism by Kant for a balanced view on the topic.

 

Topic: Contributions of moral thinkers and philosophers from India and world.

7. The middle path is the core of Buddha’s teaching and can be adopted in all walks of life. Elaborate with examples.

Difficulty level: Tough.

Reference: plato.stanford.edu

Why the question:

Key Demand of the question:  

Description of Aristotle’s Golden mean between virtues and vices and how this concept is still applicable to the present society.

Directive word: 

Elaborate – Give a detailed account as to how and why it occurred, or what is the context. You must be defining key terms wherever appropriate and substantiate with relevant associated facts.

Structure of the answer:

Introduction: 

Start with a brief middle path of Buddha.

Body:

Write about the concept of ‘middle path’ (madhyamaka) which steers clear of the extremes. Elaborte upon it as it essentially implies avoiding extremes, such as what we are witnessing today-narrow nationalism and unbridled liberalism, religious bigotry and decrying religion, obsession with a glorious past and justifying all things considered modern; in short, blind faith in what one considers right without consideration for the other’s point of view.

Conclusion:

Conclude by mentioning Buddha’s call to avoid extreme ways of practice and walk the middle way of reasonableness is the need of the hour.


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